Last saturday I was very very very sad because I could not go to Chayanne's concert. He is like my idol I love him so much and he is a very important person in my life. He influenced it in a very good way because of his handsomness and sexyness oh yeah I love him.
Instead I went to Susana... oria's house and we were crazy and I almost kill my friends when they climbed on the back of my jeep and I drove 70 mph and I wanted them to fall but unfortunatley they didn't fall it was Rulaz and Jauregui hahaha.
We also had a lot of fun and I sang a lot of songs and danced. I was the soul of the party as they say.
German- Just like you told Fran, I think that you need more than two sentences. I'm glad that you feel comfortable enough to write the way that you speak/text, but it still needs to become a little bit more clear to your reader. If you focus on writing more sentences I think it will help with the organization of this post, which definitely needs work. Right now it is all over the place, but I think there is potential to make these ideas connect and teach your readers the lesson that you learned... although I'm not exactly sure what that is. Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing the changes that you make. Thanks for sharing! :)
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